first of all, if you want the mark of the logo ( 9 ) to be there, you have to alter it, make it more abstract as i see you tried, but it came out a legible letter, you must make it into a proper mark that makes people to want to look what happens there, not something neccesarily weird, just interesting enough. Now a word about the typography, i think that you must prove you are a designer here, make something up to date, get away from this serif version and let yourself design something new, something more interesting or something cleanner that just supports the mark. In any case make more interactions with the mark and type, i believe that the mark must support the type and level the result. Good luck with it. im a tough one but i can say you this... i was looking for a logo for me for about 3 years, i believe that it came to a good result, but this is purelly my belief, if you judje it, you may not like it.. its purelly getting on the wave saving yourself from falure, its all about innovative and functional risk!

My first impression was that the top one works generally speaking, and so I give you a 2 star in "Vision".

Going deeper in the critique, I find the size ratio between the symbol and the typography a bit out of proportion. I would slightly reduce the symbol so it doesn't separate so much of the text in terms of attention: one is shouting hard while the other is whispering, even though the text is capitals only.

Except for the first mock-up, the disposition of elements is either cliché or naive (thus the half star in originality and technique).

I see a gap between the "spoken language" of the symbol and the text's. It is very hard to make a great logo using common serif fonts and numbers. Why don't you draw in your font? Give it a try, you'll see.

I like the overlay of the three 9's because it creates a certain visual distortion just like in those animation films which require special glasses. This is the reason why I give you a 3 star at impact, it stands out as the vibrant and preponderant element of the layout.

Overall, I think you have a long long way to run until you get a good, solid and memorable logo, and so I leave you with this piece of advice: try using a sans serif with non capital characters. Something that speaks the same language as the symbol, more fun, modern and at the same time with a couple of interesting details - finding some connections between the letters will add up in originality for sure.